Reflection 3
From this essay I learned that sometimes it is better to have too little evidence (quotes) than to many. If you put in too many quotes without adequate explanation of each one then you may confuse your reader. Also, including too many quotes may distract you from the personal response part of the essay, leaving your essay ‘feeling’ like a list of quotations.
Next time i will place more emphasis on the personal response part and not get too obsessed with proving to the reader why I am right. I have learned the importance of choosing and using only the most effective quotes and not all of them.
